Kuch namak…
kuchh namak se bhari thailiyan kholiye.
phir mere ghav ki pattiyan kholiye.
mere par to katar hi diye aapne,
ab to pairon ki ye rassiyan kholiye.
pehle aahat ko pehchaniye to sahi,
jaldbazi me mat khidkiyan kholiye.
bhej sakta hai kagaz ke ‘bum’ bhi koi,
aise jhatke se mat chitthiyan kholiye.
jisko bikna hai chupke se bik jaega,
yun khule’aam mat mandiyan kholiye.
-Omprakash Yati
September 7th, 2007 at 11:50 am
Beautiful piece of work by the lyricist/ poet/ singer! (who is he by the way?)
I am not too sure how you landed on my blog… but I m glad I traced you back to read this work of art.
September 26th, 2007 at 5:30 pm
Very nice lines…loved it!
September 29th, 2007 at 3:37 pm
This is such a strong composition… each para (2 lines) has such a strong meaning/message… It talks about corruption, terrorism, selfishness, helplessness…. and everything that is not right in the world now…. thanks for sharing
October 6th, 2007 at 5:13 am
Bahut achi kavita hai…….Keep writing.I think you should add your blog at BlogAdda and let more people discover your blog. It’s a great place for Indian bloggers to be in and I am sure it would do wonders for your blog.